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PostSubject: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:57 am

No more lying! I am dying! Sinking in a pit of despair.

So Shut Up! Shut Up! (scream)

Tell the truth for once, in your pitiful life!
Say it to my eyes,
'Cause I know when you're lying.
(Tell the truth! Tell the Truth!)

I'm sick of it all!
When you hide your eyes!
'Cause I don't know what to believe in anymore.~
(Scream)

Its times like these
when you'll find in my room,
A rusty blade stained in my blood.

So no more lying!
I am dying!
Sinking in a pit of despair.

Please tell the truth for once!
I promice it won't hurt!
At least not as much as the pain its caused me.

Just tell the truth for once!
If you look in my eyes,
it might just be easier.~

But! (screamed?)
Maybe it will help me on my way,
To my eternal sleep...
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:39 pm

sweet I still have that one on my computer lol keep posting because none of us can write anything good, except for the let in snow parody. props to kay for that lol
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Sun Dec 13, 2009 9:05 pm

ahah well thats ok. i have ideas for different songs, at least 2, on my stickynotes on dashboard (for Macs)
^_^

One i think would be appropriately titled as "Dance F****er!", or even "Dance Effer!" but whatever......

oh! also! i forgot! XD

OH YEAH ok so i was thinking that to possibly extend the song a bit more, one of you, possibly adam, could writ in a few verses for screaming, possibly a breakdown of what the boy i am supposedly talking about is thinking. Because I kind of think that this song is like the girl's diary or she is leaving him notes and avoiding him because she suspects him of not telling the truth. So if one of you could sort of just think about it and then post a reply on the various boy's breakdowns and thoughts on what she is saying, that would be amazing.


^_^
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PostSubject: wow   Wed Dec 23, 2009 4:19 am

hehe the only problem is adam is a dude
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:00 am

exactly. you get a female singer, then adam (the dude) could do the breakdown of the boy, or the boy's side of the story or thoughts on the matter. it is supposed to be screaming ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:40 am

we aren't getting another singer lol
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PostSubject: Re: Untitled and could use some more verses...^^"   Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:26 am

its for if you do, duh >_>
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